Tuesday, 29 October 2013

KKT 1


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Music's Effect on Teenagers                                    

Why Would Music Effect Teens?
During the teen years, many people use music as an escape. Often, someone will try to find lyrics that best identify with his/her present situation. Empathy through music is one of many ways that teens can help establish who they are, partially because of the diversity of music. There are so many types of music out there today. Rap, pop, rock, country, indie, alternative, hardcore are some of the abundant types in the world.  No matter what a teen is interested in--from hip hop to pop to metal--there are a large amount of bands in each music scene. There are also many different messages in music. Some songs have lyrics that speak of a passionate love, while others speak of anger. There's music for just about every mood a teen feels.
Understanding Music's Effect on Teenagers
Over the past few decades, two music genres have been focused on for influencing teens in one way or another. These genres are:
  • Rap/hip-hop
  • Metal or hard rock
Rap/Hip-Hop
Rap and hip hop are two genres often pegged for effecting teens.
Critics of rap and hip-hop state that this music objectifies women and promotes gang violence. Many studies have been done in recent years, such as the one on WebMD reporting that teenagers who listen to rap music are more likely to have babies and engage in risky sexual behavior. Critics of rap suggest that this is because the lyrics in many rap songs promote the idea of women as nothing more than sexual objects.
Another critique of rap and hip hop music is its role in promoting gang violence. The east coast/west coast rivalry in the 1990's which left popular rappers Biggie Smalls and Tupac Shakur dead are often cited as prime examples of this. Prior to their deaths, both rappers had songs containing lyrics stating they would murder a rival.
Metal or Hard Rock
One of the most well known incidents in which music has been blamed for the actions of a teen was in 1999. Two boys at Columbine High School opened fire on their school and killed 12 students and a teacher. The two boys also ended up committing suicide. The two boys were heavy metal music fans, particularly of Marilyn Manson. Many of Manson's songs speak of topics such as taking your anger out on others and being useless to the world.
Following the killings, many people began to blame heavy metal music and Marilyn Manson for the actions the two teenage boys took. The idea behind this blame was that the music gave the teens the idea and motivation to kill others. Opponents of the idea state that music is just music and that the boys' family should have had more influence over the teens than music.
While it may be difficult to come to a full conclusion on music's effect on teenagers, it is important to remember that teens have many influences. At any given time, a teen is being pulled in many directions. Music is just one of these directions.

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2. Masalah yang dihadapi
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/East_Coast%E2%80%93West_Coast_hip_hop_rivalry



















3. Glosari
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Catatan:  

Dalam ayat “Rap, pop, rock, country, indie, alternative, hardcore are some of the abundant types in the world”,nama jenis muzik dikekalkan kerana motif penulis hanya menyatakan contoh dan bukan menghuraikan konsep jenis muzik kepada pendengar. Tambahan pula, hal ini tidak akan menimbulkan masalah kerana nama jenis muzik ini sudah biasa didengar dalam masyarakat kini.  

Bagi ‘country’ dan ‘metal’ pula, kedua-dua perkataan tersebut sering digunakan dalam konteks lain yang membawa maksud yang berbeza.Dengan hal ini, perkataan ‘muzik’ ditambahkan untuk menunjukkan kedua-dua perkataan ini merujuk kepada salah satu jenis muzik dan bukanlah maksud yang lain.Namun, penambahan  perkataan ‘muzik’ ini  boleh digugurkan kerana tidak mempengaruhi maksud yang ingin disampaikan dalam ayat tersebut.

2 comments:

  1. 1. Untuk memurnikan lagi laporan ini, struktur tajuk boleh diperbaik. Contohnya, membuat pautan kepada rakaman TP dan meletakkan glosari pada bahagian akhir laporan.

    2. 'useless to the world' - menjadi manusia yang tidak berguna?

    3. Boleh berikan cadangan TP bagi 'east coast/west coast rivalry' dan masukkan pautan (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/East_Coast%E2%80%93West_Coast_hip_hop_rivalry) untuk pembaca yang ingin tahu lebih lanjut tentang persengketaan ini. Saya rasa 'persengketaan antara hip hop timur dan barat' lebih sesuai daripada 'kes persengketaan east coast lawan west coast'.

    4. Pada pendapat saya, TP bagi 'escape' sangat baik. Boleh masukkan cadangan TP bagi hujah e.

    5. Bagi 'promote', makna lain dalam BI (http://www.thefreedictionary.com/promote) boleh digunakan untuk membantu mencari padanan yang sesuai, contohnya 'menyokong/mendukung' (http://prpm.dbp.gov.my/Search.aspx?k=advocate).

    6. Saya suka pendekatan interaktif yang digunakan dalam TP :)

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    1. Terima kasih Dr Noni atas cadangan-cadangan yang baik sekali =)

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